first torchwood fic ever ...

[morgia]

ok, this is my first torchwood fic... its because put_that_away and cherry_soup888  believe in me and because  just_being_me08  is so fabulous and wonderful beta I put this fic here...
English is not my first language... Good lecture ;)

Don’t be afraid Ianto Jones

 

The alley is dark and stinking. A bad place to die thinks the man now lying on the ground. A red stain on his perfect suit, looks like almost pretty in the contrast with the white shirt covering his stomach. The shivers come to him like waves, an awful pain tearing up his body. He’s going to die and he knows it. He’s alone, a light rain falling softly like a caress on his face. The darkness is coming, slowly bring him into its arms.

“Ianto, it’s going to be all right.” Says a voice at his side.

The man turns around to see a beautiful Japanese woman look at him with a warm smile.

“Tosh, your dead...” Whispers the man.

“Yes I am. Ianto I’m here for you, don’t be afraid.” Answers the young woman in return.

“Tosh, it hurts... The pain…. I don’t want to die.” He says like a prayer.

“I’m sorry my friend, I’m so sorry...” She says before she disappears.

 

The alley is dark and stinking. A man lies there alone, he’s going to die and he knows it.

“Hey tea boy, what are you doing here?” Says a voice at his side.

“Owen……..what’s it like to die?” Questions the man with a deep groan within his voice.

“Tea boy, where’s your famous captain? What? He doesn’t want to shag you anymore?” The apparition replies with a grin.

“Me and Jack it’s more than that, I’m more than a shag for him...”

“If you say so...”

“Owen, I don’t want to die...”

“Ianto, it’s going to be all right.” He says before he disappears.

 

The alley is dark and stinking. A man lies there alone, he’s going to die and he knows it.

“Ianto, my beautiful lover.” Says a voice beside him.

“Lisa….. my Lisa.” Replies the man with a cry in his voice.

“Ianto, I love you, I always will...”

“Lisa, takes away the pain, please...”

“Come back to me my love….” She says before she disappears.

 

The alley is dark and stinking. A man lies there alone, he’s going to die and he knows it.

“My poor little boy, what’s happened to you?” Says a warm voice beside him.

“Mum, please take me home!” Says the man who’s crying now.

“My baby, I’m here for you...”

“Mother, it hurts. I’m so cold...”

“Shhh, I’m here baby, I’m here..” Says his mother before she disappears.

 

The alley is dark and stinking. A man lies there alone, he going to die and he knows it.

“Ianto!” Shouts a voice approaching him.

The man smiles, he knows who it is.

“Ianto, look at me. I’m here now, you’ll be fine, I promise...” Says the man beside him, a hand on his wound, trying to stop the blood from flowing out.

“Jack, it hurts, please take the pain away...” Begs the man in a soft voice, almost like sigh.

“Oh no, don’t you dare! You’re not going to die, Ianto stay with me!” Orders the other man like he trying to convince himself more than Ianto.

“Jack, I’m sorry...” Murmurs the man on the ground before the darkness takes him away like a mother rocks a child.

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A man lies there in white room, on a white blanket, his face is so pale, but this time the man is not alone. Slowly his eyes open, his eyelids so heavy, as if he’s seeing the light for the first time in his life.

“Ianto…..” Says a soft voice beside him.

“Jack……” Whispers the man like a dream.

“Ianto please….always come back to me.” Replies the other man at his ear, words like a kiss.

 “Always Jack, always... “ Says the man lying there before returning into the welcoming darkness.

 

Fin

Comments

[put-that-away.livejournal.com]

It wasn't a stupid question! It was a perfectly reasonable question :) I too am terrible with technology and I frequently get confused!

[morgia.livejournal.com]

Yep, so imagine I'm confuse with the technology and more, its all in English... Hooo, and why a fic about mprg ?

[put-that-away.livejournal.com]

Yeah, for it to be in a language that is not
your first must be very confusing! lol, ah, yes... the mpreg fic. I blame that on the alcohol! It was not me talking, it was the booze! It just came to me and I thought it was just an interesting little drabble. Did you really not like it?

[morgia.livejournal.com]

lol Hey !!! No you misunderstood me !!!It was very very great written, like always ! Its just I don't understand this desir for read about a man pregnant. Hé, chérie dont worry its was good ;)
BIG HUGS !!!!!!!!

[put-that-away.livejournal.com]

Lol, well awww thank you so much. I am glad that you enjoyed the way it was written :) No I don't really get why people want to read about a man being pregnant, all I can say for my story was that it came to me and just wouldn't stop bothering me until I wrote it down. Take care hun xxx

[morgia.livejournal.com]

Well, I think that is the little writer voice, when a story don't want to leave you ^;)Prends soin de toi ma belle xxxx Gros calins et big hugs xx