first torchwood fic ever ...
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morgiaok, this is my first torchwood fic... its because
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put_that_away and cherry_soup888 believe in me and because just_being_me08 is so fabulous and wonderful beta I put this fic here... English is not my first language... Good lecture ;)
Don’t be afraid Ianto Jones
The alley is dark and stinking. A bad place to die thinks the man now lying on the ground. A red stain on his perfect suit, looks like almost pretty in the contrast with the white shirt covering his stomach. The shivers come to him like waves, an awful pain tearing up his body. He’s going to die and he knows it. He’s alone, a light rain falling softly like a caress on his face. The darkness is coming, slowly bring him into its arms.
“Ianto, it’s going to be all right.” Says a voice at his side.
The man turns around to see a beautiful Japanese woman look at him with a warm smile.
“Tosh, your dead...” Whispers the man.
“Yes I am. Ianto I’m here for you, don’t be afraid.” Answers the young woman in return.
“Tosh, it hurts... The pain…. I don’t want to die.” He says like a prayer.
“I’m sorry my friend, I’m so sorry...” She says before she disappears.
The alley is dark and stinking. A man lies there alone, he’s going to die and he knows it.
“Hey tea boy, what are you doing here?” Says a voice at his side.
“Owen……..what’s it like to die?” Questions the man with a deep groan within his voice.
“Tea boy, where’s your famous captain? What? He doesn’t want to shag you anymore?” The apparition replies with a grin.
“Me and Jack it’s more than that, I’m more than a shag for him...”
“If you say so...”
“Owen, I don’t want to die...”
“Ianto, it’s going to be all right.” He says before he disappears.
The alley is dark and stinking. A man lies there alone, he’s going to die and he knows it.
“Ianto, my beautiful lover.” Says a voice beside him.
“Lisa….. my Lisa.” Replies the man with a cry in his voice.
“Ianto, I love you, I always will...”
“Lisa, takes away the pain, please...”
“Come back to me my love….” She says before she disappears.
The alley is dark and stinking. A man lies there alone, he’s going to die and he knows it.
“My poor little boy, what’s happened to you?” Says a warm voice beside him.
“Mum, please take me home!” Says the man who’s crying now.
“My baby, I’m here for you...”
“Mother, it hurts. I’m so cold...”
“Shhh, I’m here baby, I’m here..” Says his mother before she disappears.
The alley is dark and stinking. A man lies there alone, he going to die and he knows it.
“Ianto!” Shouts a voice approaching him.
The man smiles, he knows who it is.
“Ianto, look at me. I’m here now, you’ll be fine, I promise...” Says the man beside him, a hand on his wound, trying to stop the blood from flowing out.
“Jack, it hurts, please take the pain away...” Begs the man in a soft voice, almost like sigh.
“Oh no, don’t you dare! You’re not going to die, Ianto stay with me!” Orders the other man like he trying to convince himself more than Ianto.
“Jack, I’m sorry...” Murmurs the man on the ground before the darkness takes him away like a mother rocks a child.
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A man lies there in white room, on a white blanket, his face is so pale, but this time the man is not alone. Slowly his eyes open, his eyelids so heavy, as if he’s seeing the light for the first time in his life.
“Ianto…..” Says a soft voice beside him.
“Jack……” Whispers the man like a dream.
“Ianto please….always come back to me.” Replies the other man at his ear, words like a kiss.
“Always Jack, always... “ Says the man lying there before returning into the welcoming darkness.
Fin
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Date: 2008-11-09 11:53 pm (UTC)Thank you for sharing such a lovely story with us
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Date: 2008-11-10 12:04 am (UTC)Big hugs ma chérie
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Date: 2008-11-10 12:12 am (UTC)*Massive hugs*
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Nadine so happy for you massive hugs that I return with a big plane more hugs !!! lol
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Date: 2008-11-10 02:18 am (UTC)Yay, hugs!!! *Gives you more massive hugs!!*
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Date: 2008-11-10 03:09 pm (UTC)your first must be very confusing! lol, ah, yes... the mpreg fic. I blame that on the alcohol! It was not me talking, it was the booze! It just came to me and I thought it was just an interesting little drabble. Did you really not like it?
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Date: 2008-11-10 09:17 pm (UTC)BIG HUGS !!!!!!!!
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Date: 2008-11-10 12:13 am (UTC)*lots of hugs for you!!*
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Date: 2008-11-10 12:37 am (UTC)Writting more ? heuuu, well maybe...;)
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Date: 2008-11-10 12:53 am (UTC)And yes!! write more, I love all your writing you know that. Send me whatever!
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Date: 2008-11-10 12:56 am (UTC)xxx
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Date: 2008-11-10 01:09 am (UTC)Sian
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Date: 2008-11-10 01:38 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-11-10 12:19 am (UTC)THAT WAS GORGEOUS!
I LOVED IT!
I swear to God hunny, your language skills are amazing.
The fic was beautiful and yay for you!
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Date: 2008-11-10 12:40 am (UTC)Take care ma belle
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Big hugs et gros calins !!!!
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Date: 2008-11-10 03:13 am (UTC)Glad you ventured into the writing world. Congratulations! And thanks for sharing with us, too.
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Date: 2008-11-10 06:22 am (UTC)Et j'ai remarqué que tu viens du Québec, alors c'est pour ça que je commente en français, un terrain linguistique que je maîtrise mieux que l'anglais hihi.
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Date: 2008-11-10 09:21 pm (UTC)Au plaisir de te recroiser sur ce merveilleux site !! ;)
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Date: 2008-11-10 09:34 pm (UTC)Take care ma belle and I hope you writting goes well :)Big hugs
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Date: 2009-03-06 01:23 pm (UTC)Of course, gorgeous Jack cannot simply let Ianto day and saved him, giving the necessary strength to come back to him.
Thanks for sharing! (English isn´t my first language too)
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Date: 2009-03-07 03:01 am (UTC)You spanich right? I understand very well this language, its near to French.... ;)
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Date: 2009-03-07 03:04 am (UTC)Spanish and French are quite similar, I had French at high school, too long ago ;)
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