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Title: Murmurs
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: G
Spoilers: none
Disclaimer: No, I don't know them
Warning: angsty fluff (is it possible?)
Summary: Jack hold Ianto.... in an alley........
Notes: This is a little fic for my so delicious and fabulous beta. Because is impossible to hug her in the real life right now, I gave her this little fic. She thought it was good, so I updated. Hope you will enjoy!!!!!!
Beta: The gorgeous and delicious just_being_me08
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Murmurs
Two men lie on the ground. One takes his young lover into his arms, his eyes are closed. He firmly presses his body against him, like the world will crumble if he lets go. A strong hand caresses his forehead, the other grasping at his coat, trying to close it to keep him warm. He murmurs some words into his ear, rocking him softly. For indifferent walkers, the scene could be almost romantic; two drunk lovers in a dark alley embracing each other. But, if someone just took a little moment to really look carefully at the scene, that person would see what was really happening. But nobody takes any notice.
“Ianto… Hope it is not too cold…. I’m trying my best…..”
A sighs flits through the air.
“Do you know how much I love to see you smile….. When you do it, it’s like the world suddenly lightens….. So please my beautiful boy smile to me now….”
The younger man remains indifferent in his arms.
“This morning when you laughed loudly in the conference room at Owen’s nasty joke, it was like fire exploding inside me. Your eyes….. You had something in your eyes….. Like the sparkle of the stars been locked inside….. Please my Jones, my Ianto Jones, open your eyes for me.….”
The young man stays quiet, shadows dance across his face.
“When you think nobody is looking at you, I love the way you scratch your delicious buttocks. That makes me love you more….. So please my naughty boy, talk to me…..”
The last words murmured into his ear have no consequence, Ianto Jones doesn’t react.
“You know that play you talked about last week? Well, yesterday I bought two tickets for the last show. It was supposed to be a surprise, but you know me, never able to keep a secret. So wake up my fabulous friend, you have to scold me.”
A laugh echoes coldly in the dark alley. The smile on the captain’s face looks feigned.
“Ianto….. I know I yelled at you before the hunt….. I was just so nervous….. I shouldn’t say those stupid things….. You are not useless….. I’m an idiot and the biggest bastard on earth…… Please Ianto, forgive me…..”
Suddenly thunder explodes like a rage in the sky and a flash of lightening cuts through the sky. Heavy rain falls to the ground. Both men are now completely wet.
“Ianto…. Ianto….. Ianto….. Don’t leave me this way……. Ianto….. Ianto…..”
The older man grasps desperately at the younger man’s coat, crying loudly into his neck.
“Jack…… Shut up…..”
“Ianto?”
“Jack……. Do you know….you can be the worst…. Drama queen I ever met…..”
“Ianto? Are you all right?”
“There’s a pain…. In my head…..”
“The Weevil attacked you from behind and smashed you into the wall….. I thought I’d lost you……I thought…. Ianto I’m so sorry!!!! So sorry!!”
“Jack…. Shut up…. And kiss me….”
The man kisses his young lover like the world will stop if he didn’t. In the dark and wet alley, two men are lying there. For the hurried passers by, the scene looks like two drunk lovers have collapsed there. But, if someone just took a little moment to really look carefully at the scene, that person would see what was really happening. But nobody any notice.
Fin
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Date: 2009-04-11 02:09 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-11 02:48 am (UTC)Take cares
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How romantic
Date: 2009-04-11 02:20 am (UTC)Re: How romantic
Date: 2009-04-11 02:55 am (UTC)I'm so happy you enjoyed this !!!!!!!!
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Date: 2009-04-12 04:49 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2009-04-11 02:56 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-11 02:41 am (UTC)I can't express how much I loved it. You've got such a beautiful writing style.
But nobody takes any notice.
I don't know why, but that sentence, at the start and at the end, I love it. It's so true. I...I...eh merde, I can't express myself correctly tonight. *shakes head*
Take care chouette, et Joyeuses Pâques encore
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Date: 2009-04-11 02:58 am (UTC)I love this sentence too.... Its like they are alone in their bubble..... its happy and sad sentence in the same time.....
I'm so exhausted too...... I'm very happy you liked !!! *big hug*
Prends soin de toi aussi ma chérie
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Date: 2009-04-11 04:24 am (UTC)lol
Hope that make you smile
Thank to read and comment
Big hug et gros calins
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Date: 2009-04-11 02:14 pm (UTC)You're always welcome *HUGS*
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Date: 2009-04-11 03:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-11 09:03 am (UTC)brilliant!
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Date: 2009-04-11 03:05 pm (UTC)Take care ma belle
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Date: 2009-04-11 03:22 pm (UTC)*hugs*
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Date: 2009-04-11 03:28 pm (UTC)I think you have to write more fluff soon! Very soon! Please?????
Take care
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Date: 2009-04-11 03:46 pm (UTC)but I promise I'll write fluff when the muse hits me
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Date: 2009-04-11 03:47 pm (UTC)Have a great day ! ;)
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Date: 2009-04-11 09:33 am (UTC)The line about Ianto's buttocks made me giggle.
You've got to love Jack in Drama-Queen mode x3
Oh this fic made me smile, just what I needed^^
Thank you so much!*hugs*
Have a Happy Easter and take care :)
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Date: 2009-04-11 03:08 pm (UTC)The line about Ianto's buttock is my favorite!!!LOL So happy you liked too!!!! Drama Queen jack is sooooooo funnny to write!!!! ;p
Haaaaaa, this is my favorite kind of comment when someone say my fic make them smile! *big hug*
Thank YOU to read and comment !!!
Bonne pâques à toi aussi ma chérie
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Date: 2009-04-11 05:23 pm (UTC)You can't blame Jack for being a drama queen though. He thought his Ianto was dead!
Great job!!!
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Date: 2009-04-11 06:36 pm (UTC)Haaaaa take care and have a nice week-end !!!! ;)
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Date: 2009-04-13 09:10 pm (UTC)Yééééé, so happy that made you smile! That is the better compliment I can have *big hug*
Take care ma chérie
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Date: 2009-05-15 03:32 am (UTC)"Ah Christ, it's getting light out there hug*
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Date: 2009-05-15 03:43 am (UTC)*hooo no gosh this is scary when this happens and you realised you didn't sleep all night hug¸*