You're falling Ianto Jones, takes my hand - Part 1 (1/?)

[morgia]

Title: You're falling Ianto Jones, takes my hand - Part 1 (1/?)
Pairing: Jack/Ianto 
Rating: NC-17, dark, angst
Spoilers: not really, somewhere in season 2
Summary: Torchwood always save the day, but maybe not this times...
Notes:  Ok, this is not a christmas tales, this prompt didn't want to leave me alone, so I wrote it.And no I'm not insane, I'm only a teach.
Beta: the fabulous, brilliant, amazing and so talented, just_being_me08 

You’re falling Ianto Jones, take my hand...

Prologue

Part one

His breath, hot and dry, his lungs unable to take anymore. His heart beat drumming in his ears, a deep panic that keeps him on the edge. It can’t be, no, it’s impossible. He runs in the simple hope that it might all be a trick. He hears the foot steps of his team following him, but they sound so far away. Nothing seems to be real, he can’t believe anything anymore. The doors open with a loud crash, he climbs the stairs like a beast who know its trap, enters the dark room and sees.  The body lying there, in the middle of the room.  His hand touches her face, it’s so cold, his mouth caresses her lips, it’s all so wrong. Something breaks inside him, suddenly he feels so empty.  Gwen Cooper is dead.

“What’s wrong sir? She lies there alone, just for you. Is that not what you wanted?” Says a voice behind him.

“Ianto......what have you done?” Jack asks, the broken anger so clear in his voice.

“I don’t know. I played with her and a moment later she cracked. She was not so strong after all.” Ianto replies with a grin.

“Gwen, wake up please. Don’t leave us, don’t leave me...” Whispers Jack like a prayer, cradling her body in his arms.

“You are pathetic. You disgust me.” Says the other man coldly.

Suddenly, Ianto feels like a wall has fallen on him, he can’t breathe anymore, the pain…it’s everywhere. Jack, his boss, his friend, his lover hits him furiously, makes him scream, puts him to hell. Through the beating, an irrational laugh builds inside him like a fire ball and explodes from his mouth. Hearing Ianto’s laugh stirs up Jack’s anger, the older man punching him harder and harder. Blood is everywhere, on both their faces, on Jack’s hands, on the ground. The only noise that resonates through the room is Jack’s fist as it pounds into Ianto’s body; an eerie, repetitive sound.

“Jack….. stop!” A voice shouts from somewhere behind them.

The surprise paralyses Jack’s movements for a second, leaving Ianto to free himself and run away. He doesn’t look back, he knows Jack will follow him and it’s exactly what he has wanted.

 

Somewhere in Cardiff, behind the dark alleys, inside a ruined building, trapped in a small and dirty room a woman lies there with the dead kissing at her lips. A hand caresses her hair whilst others hands tries to stop the haemorrhaging.

“Owen…… is she dead?” Questions a soft voice nervously.

TBC
Part two

Comments

[mizzclara.livejournal.com]

Powerful stuff. Can't wait for the next part!
=] =]

[morgia.livejournal.com]

Hooo, thank you so much for your comment, I'm so anxious about what I done about our Ianto... lol ;)

[bardlover6.livejournal.com]

I can't wait to see what's wrong with Ianto.

[morgia.livejournal.com]

Well, I send the next chapter to my beta, so maybe soon... Thanks for reading and commenting;)

[elanor12.livejournal.com]

*toujours sous le shock*
Can't wait to know what's wrong with Ianto.

Très bien écrit...très puissant.
...
c'est difficile de commenter en français sur quelque chose de TW...mon cerveau n'y est pas habitué lol. Même si bien souvent j'ai de la misère m'exprimer clairement en anglais.

J'ai hâte d'en lire plus :D

[morgia.livejournal.com]

Naaaa, well its the same for me, its so strange to comment and speak about Torchwood in French, I never do that...
Merci beaucoup pour tes commentaires, c'est vraiment apprécié! En fait, c'est difficile d'écrire en anglais et je ne suis jamais certaine si c'est réellement bon...
More soon, I send my next chapter to my beta !!!
Thank you so much for read and comment ;)

[missthingsplace.livejournal.com]

Oh my ... what's wrong with Ianto, i need to know!

[morgia.livejournal.com]

Naaa, sorry I feel so bad about him... Thanks for read and comment miss, its mean a lot ;)

[madaboutms.livejournal.com]

Oh Ianto,ehat has happened to you? I'm not sure I can handle another bad Ianto.

[morgia.livejournal.com]

ho ! Well, I hope you will continue to read... more soon and more evil Ianto lol :)

[darketernal09.livejournal.com]

*points to icon*

[morgia.livejournal.com]

Ok... so,I'm not sure what you try to say, my fic is a bullshit or what happens to Ianto is a bullshit? Because if you don't like that and you take the times to comment,at least take the times to explain what you don't like.

[wykling.livejournal.com]

oh wow, ianto killed gwen!! O.O
what happened to ianto?
i'm so hooked! off to part 3!

[morgia.livejournal.com]

LOL Hé, very nice to see you around !!!!

[buttononthetop.livejournal.com]

Yikes!! Thank goodness there is more to read!

[morgia.livejournal.com]

LOL Yup, more to read ! Thanks for the comment !