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morgia ([personal profile] morgia) wrote2009-02-11 07:45 pm
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Shhhhh…. Close your eyes Ianto Jones, it’s not a dream…chapter six


Title: Shhhhh…. Close your eyes Ianto Jones, it’s not a dream…chapter six

Pairing: Jack/Ianto , the team
Rating: NC-17, angst
Spoilers
: Not really, somewhere early in season 1, but after countryside and cyberwoman
Disclaimer
: No, I don't know them

Summary: Torchwood team has problem, can Jack save them all ?
Summary chapter:  Its not over....

Notes:  So this is a new series. I hope you gonna like it. I don’t know what I have this days, my life it’s a little bit complicated, a moment I laugh and the moment after I cry. My muses are crazy… and no I’m not pregnant, I’m only a teach.
Beta: the so fabulous and talented just_being_me08   
 


Previous chapter




Shhhhh…. Close your eyes Ianto Jones, it’s not a dream….

 

Chapter six

 

Years ago

Blood is everywhere; the corpses lay there in perfect immobility. In this chaos, one man still lives. He is sitting on the ground, in his arms a young man rests. Death brought him down just like the others, the last vestige of his young life escaping his lips. The man drinks his last breath in a kiss. Beside him a glass ball stands. Only a moment before, a strong light exploded in the ball, but now it is dead just like the five people around. The only survivor holds the man more firmly in his arms. His eyes are closed, his face is dark, no tears fall. It’s like a cold hand squeezing at his heart, like he could never breath normally again. Jack Harkness is a broken man, he swears to himself he will never love again.

 

Now

They lie on the ground. Death hasn’t taken them yet. A luminous glass ball turns around them. Jack takes Ianto in his arms; the young man is just unconscious. He is so pale that the other man has to hold him close to be sure that life doesn’t leave him. He feels his breath, but his heart beat is too fast.

“Ianto, I’m here… Please, stay with me… You have to relax…”

Behind him, foot steps echo in the night. Owen runs towards them. Then, Ianto convulses, his body shakes violently. A moment later, his convulsions stop and Ianto becomes like a rag doll in Jack’s arms.

“Fuck, the tea boy has had a heart attack! Let him go, Jack I have to do cardiac resuscitation! MOVE!”

 

One month before

Ianto sighs, the silence in the Hub is so intense, its so empty. He walks around to collect the dishes and the waste the others leave behind. It’s his role, his job, what he was hired for. But, sometimes, at moments like this, he misses Lisa in the basement. His beautiful Lisa, injured, alone and so in need. He knows she was not her anymore, but at least she needed him, he had a purpose, a utility. His life had meaning. Some days, the guilt and the sadness was so hard to bear, that it was like strong hands pressing down onto his shoulder, like walking was more difficult with every step. Then one day, it all stopped, his secret had been discovered and his world crumbled. Ianto sighs, yes that day was a nightmare, but at the same time it was like someone pulled his head from the water, like he could breathe for the first time in a while. But now, he knows the real significance of loneliness.

 

Now

“We’re losing him Jack!”

“Owen, you’re the medic…. do your damn job! Save him!”

“Jack…. I…. I can’t…”

Ianto just lies there, so pale, his heart stopping. He’s dead.

 

Two weeks before

Jack Harkness sighs, he feels so empty, so exhausted. He feels so old, immortality is a curse, the loneliness is like a wound which is always open. He closes his eyes; sitting at his desk, papers and reports all around him. Then a hand presses softly on his shoulder.

“Jack….”

Ianto stands behind him. So beautiful in his perfect suit, he smiles at him, but the expression on his face is obscure, his eyes are sad. Jack looks at him, like he is seeing him for the first time, like he knows exactly what he needs. He opens his arms and pulls the other man into a firm and tender embrace. His head rests on Ianto’s chest. Ianto’s arms encircle him and for a moment time stops, the worries go away, they are not alone anymore.

 

Now

Three men lay on the ground. One is dead, the two others watching him silently, like they don’t realize what has happened.

“Jack… Jack I’m so sorry…”

“I lost him before…”

“Jack… What slowed down your fall?…. We saw you on CCTV…”

“ It was the ball…… it was in my pocket…. I don’t understand why but it seems as if it didn’t want us to fall to our deaths…… yet…..”

Suddenly the young man gasps and opens his eyes. A low moan escapes his mouth.

“Jack! He’s…. he’s alive!”

“They want to play… Damn it, the sons of bitches, they want to play….”

Jack pulls Ianto into his arms, kissing his forehead.

“Ianto, I’m so sorry, so sorry….”

 

TBC

Like everytime I really hope you enjoyed it and please, pretty leave a message ;)
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[identity profile] elanor12.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 01:33 am (UTC)(link)
once again, I love it. You do like to scare us eh?
I love how you jump in time. :)

Take care chouette
-xx-

[identity profile] morgia.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 01:47 am (UTC)(link)
lol Well, I have to admit I like to play..... Thanks so much to read and comment its mean a lot that you take time to write everytime ;)
Take care too chérie
xx
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[identity profile] elanor12.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 04:33 am (UTC)(link)
*hugs*
It's the least I can do. You take time to write those wonderful stories...in english nonetheless!! (is that really a word lol).

Plus ma chère, you make me pratice my english. And if I want to go one day in England or Wales (which I really really want), I need it ;-)

[identity profile] morgia.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 04:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Yééé, well I'm happy you can practice your English and thanks soooo much to comment and read ;)

Hope you will go to England some days is soooo great there (but its always rainning....)
Take care and have a great day
Hug
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[identity profile] frakkin-addict.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow, so much emotion. I really felt for Jack as he sat there with Ianto dying in his arms.

"he swears to himself he will never love again" So sad!

I also really liked the glimpses back in time. Really made the whole chapter come together beautifully. Loved it.

And the way you described Ianto, "like strong hands pressing down onto his shoulder, like walking was more difficult with every step". Wow. I totally got how he was feeling. Wonderful. Fantastic chapter!


[identity profile] morgia.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 02:35 am (UTC)(link)
Haaaa Chérie! Your cheerladear are soooo happy right now ! Thank you sooo much for this comment!

I try my best to write great sentence, to play with the words so its very appreciated that you think it great written !
Big hug
xx
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[identity profile] frakkin-addict.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 02:48 am (UTC)(link)
Vous êtes une génie ma chérie. Votre écriture remue des émotions. J'adore chaque mot! *Grande Bisou*

[identity profile] morgia.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 02:53 am (UTC)(link)
*blush* Merci!!!!!! And the fact you take the effort to write in French mean a lot !!!!
*bigger hug*
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[identity profile] frakkin-addict.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 02:57 am (UTC)(link)
Ah Morgia, si vous pouvez écrire des histoires entières en anglais, moins je peux écrire une commentaire ou deux en français. :)

[identity profile] morgia.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 03:00 am (UTC)(link)
oui mais j'ai une beta ;) Et ton français est excellent !
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[identity profile] frakkin-addict.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 03:04 am (UTC)(link)
Ha! Et moi, j'ai un mari qui parle français. ;)

[identity profile] morgia.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 03:06 am (UTC)(link)
lol C'est encore mieux moi ma beta est en England!!!
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[identity profile] frakkin-addict.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 03:08 am (UTC)(link)
Ah oui? Elle est vraillement chanceux! ;)

[identity profile] morgia.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 03:10 am (UTC)(link)
Elle est fabuleuse! et moi aussi je voudrais rester la bas....
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[identity profile] frakkin-addict.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 03:12 am (UTC)(link)
Qui!!! Prenez-moi avec vous!

[identity profile] morgia.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
You know what we should go there !!!!
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[identity profile] frakkin-addict.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 03:21 am (UTC)(link)
The second I win the lottery, I'm buying 3 one-way tickets to Cardiff (Quaintheart has to come too!). ;)

[identity profile] morgia.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 03:25 am (UTC)(link)
lol Ok, its a deal !!!!! Maybe if John or Gareth come near to Montreal this summer we could go to see them... it will more easy ! ;) Ok, take care have to go to bed xxxx
Big hug
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[identity profile] frakkin-addict.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 03:25 am (UTC)(link)
good night!!!

[identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 02:51 am (UTC)(link)
Oh you were this close to getting Cavegirl Buffy - you almost killed my Ianto LOL. Another great update! I'm really anxious to see what happens next in this story!

[identity profile] morgia.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 02:55 am (UTC)(link)
LOL Thrace !!! Heuuu, do I supposed to be afraid? ..... Don't hurt me.... But Ianto its so great to play with !!!!! Thanks ma chérie and I wait for an other fic or vid from you ! Hope you had a great day !
Big hug

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh, you evil!

[identity profile] morgia.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 04:17 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL I know.... I'm sorry.... But I love it sooo much....

[identity profile] wykling.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 01:59 pm (UTC)(link)
whoa my heart just nearly stopped xD
but yay!*dances* Ianto is alive!
I love these little flashbacks, they are brilliant!!! :D
A little question: does Jack mean that incident in cyberwoman with "I lost him before"?
Anyway I can't wait for the next part! :D
Take care and big hugs
xxx

[identity profile] morgia.livejournal.com 2009-02-12 04:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Hooo no!!! I call Owen for a cardiac resuscitation! lol

Thanks !!!! *big hug* I really love to write this flashback, its help to understand the characters... and Ianto sooooo alone in the hub.... poor little baby....

Well, about your question when I wrote it I thought about when he tought Ianto failed to the roof.... but yes, its very interesting it could be at cyberwoman scene.... ;)

Well, if my muse are great with me it could be a new chapter soon !!!
Take care
xxxxxx