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Jack
Title: Jack
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Not really, somewhere early in season 2
Disclaimer: No, I don't know them
Warning: mention of sex.
Summary: Ianto’s thoughts about Jack…
Notes: I don’t know if this fic is slash or smut, English is not my first language and I have a lot of difficulty with all this terms. So, yes, mention of sex in this fic. I don’t know what I have this days, my life it’s a little bit complicated, a moment I laugh and the moment after I cry. My muses are crazy… and no I’m not pregnant, I’m only a teach.
Beta: just_being_me08
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Jack
He makes me smile. When I’m with him I feel like a fire ball is exploding within me, I suddenly feel so strong. When he touches me, my skin burns and I feel so good. His voice in my ears and his strong hands on my buttocks bring me to a place where there simply is no one else there. When his tongue caresses my nipples, my body answers in waves of pleasure and I beg softly for his teeth to bite. If his mouth devours me softly, I pray for the game to never end. Sometimes, I think I could die in his arms without regretting it for a second. When he takes me to the edge, I have to bite my lip so that I don’t scream because the rest of the team are somewhere in the hub, far enough away to not see us but close enough to hear us. The fear of breaking all the rules is such a thrill. My body looks like it’s not mine anymore when my orgasm takes it under its control. I can feel his smile when he kisses me as I almost collapse to the ground. It’s so cold inside when he leaves me, for a moment I feel so lost. Then, I fasten my tie, I fix my suit and I walk with all the dignity I have out of his office. His scent on my skin helps me to continue, give me the courage to confront all my demons. Because now I know I’m not just the tea boy anymore. Owen can say what he wants about it all, I’m more than a part-time shag to Jack. I know I will never be alone any longer, because Jack promises me that he will always protect me. I believe him.
Fin
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That was so gorgeous!
I couldn't sleep so I thought I'd have a quick peek and you wrote fic!
Its amazing sweetie, I lov your language, I think it's beautiful and you are beautiful.
xxx
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We really do throw terms around. I don't even know what FRAO means.
Great fic. Your English is excellent too.
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FRT — Fan Rated Suitable For Teenagers
FRM — Fan Rated Suitable For Mature Persons
FRAO — Fan Rated Suitable For Adults Only
Hope that helps! :D
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So if I still not able to sleep, at least I have now some beautiful images in my mind :)
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Hope you're doing good with your monsters ;)(you're an high school teacher, right?)
P.s. I love the image on top of your page...Trop chou!! :)
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p.s Thanks, I thought it would be more in the "winter mood" ;)
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Right, I've slept, and I'm here!!
Well....what do I say? You know how much I love this. I loved how you managed to write the pure sex of Jack and Ianto's relationship, without it feeling cold and unloved. It really was just amazing, the way you described every little detail. Its all about the ambiance in your writing, which is definitely one of your strengths as a writer in my opinion. Never lose it!
Anyway, this was a pleasure to beta for you, and I feel so proud to see all the lovely comments that have been written her. A talent like yours deserves recognition. :)
love,
Siany xxxx
Re: Right, I've slept, and I'm here!!
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Nadine
Hope you had a great day ;)
Big hug et gros calins
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Merci
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Fliss
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Really awesome!!
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You are soooo fabulous with all yours comments, thank you soooo much ;)
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Yep,encourage people, sometime just a little word at my student made de difference.
take care