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morgia ([personal profile] morgia) wrote2009-04-10 09:22 pm
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Murmurs


Title: Murmurs
Pairing: Jack/Ianto 
Rating: G
Spoilers: none
Disclaimer: No, I don't know them

Warning: angsty fluff (is it possible?)
Summary:  Jack hold Ianto.... in an alley........
Notes:  This is a little fic for my so delicious and fabulous beta. Because is impossible to hug her in the real life right now, I gave her this little fic. She thought it was good, so I updated. Hope you will enjoy!!!!!!
Beta: The gorgeous and delicious just_being_me08

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Murmurs

 

Two men lie on the ground. One takes his young lover into his arms, his eyes are closed. He firmly presses his body against him, like the world will crumble if he lets go. A strong hand caresses his forehead, the other grasping at his coat, trying to close it to keep him warm. He murmurs some words into his ear, rocking him softly. For indifferent walkers, the scene could be almost romantic; two drunk lovers in a dark alley embracing each other. But, if someone just took a little moment to really look carefully at the scene, that person would see what  was really happening. But nobody takes any notice.

“Ianto… Hope it is not too cold…. I’m trying my best…..”

A sighs flits through the air.

“Do you know how much I love to see you smile….. When you do it, it’s like the world suddenly lightens….. So please my beautiful boy smile to me now….”

The younger man remains indifferent in his arms.

“This morning when you laughed loudly in the conference room at Owen’s nasty joke, it was like fire exploding inside me. Your eyes….. You had something in your eyes….. Like the sparkle of the stars been locked inside….. Please my Jones, my Ianto Jones, open your eyes for me.….”

The young man stays quiet, shadows dance across his face.

“When you think nobody is looking at you, I love the way you scratch your delicious buttocks. That makes me love you more….. So please my naughty boy, talk to me…..”

The last words murmured into his ear have no consequence, Ianto Jones doesn’t react.

“You know that play you talked about last week? Well, yesterday I bought two tickets for the last show. It was supposed to be a surprise, but you know me, never able to keep a secret. So wake up my fabulous friend, you have to scold me.”

A laugh echoes coldly in the dark alley. The smile on the captain’s face looks feigned.

“Ianto….. I know I yelled at you before the hunt….. I was just so nervous….. I shouldn’t say those stupid things….. You are not useless….. I’m an idiot and the biggest bastard on earth…… Please Ianto, forgive me…..”

Suddenly thunder explodes like a rage in the sky and a flash of lightening cuts through the sky. Heavy rain falls to the ground. Both men are now completely wet.

“Ianto…. Ianto….. Ianto….. Don’t leave me this way……. Ianto….. Ianto…..”

The older man grasps desperately at the younger man’s coat, crying loudly into his neck.

“Jack…… Shut up…..”

“Ianto?”

“Jack……. Do you know….you can be the worst…. Drama queen I ever met…..”

“Ianto? Are you all right?”

“There’s a pain…. In my head…..”

“The Weevil attacked you from behind and smashed you into the wall….. I thought I’d lost you……I thought…. Ianto I’m so sorry!!!! So sorry!!”

“Jack…. Shut up…. And kiss me….”

The man kisses his young lover like the world will stop if he didn’t. In the dark and wet alley, two men are lying there. For the hurried passers by, the scene looks like two drunk lovers have collapsed there. But, if someone just took a little moment to really look carefully at the scene, that person would see what was really happening. But nobody any notice.

 

 

Fin


 

[identity profile] emyrldlady.livejournal.com 2009-04-11 02:09 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, Quite lovely, and Jack is such a drama queen! but we love him for it!

How romantic

[identity profile] angel-of-doctor.livejournal.com 2009-04-11 02:20 am (UTC)(link)
It is so beautiful and poetic! If I had a similar situation, I would have done the same thing. What made you think of this (it's so good)?
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[identity profile] elanor12.livejournal.com 2009-04-11 02:41 am (UTC)(link)
Wow ma belle. Just wow. **hugs**
I can't express how much I loved it. You've got such a beautiful writing style.

But nobody takes any notice.
I don't know why, but that sentence, at the start and at the end, I love it. It's so true. I...I...eh merde, I can't express myself correctly tonight. *shakes head*

Take care chouette, et Joyeuses Pâques encore
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[identity profile] seether-79.livejournal.com 2009-04-11 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
I really enjoyed this, very well written darl :D

[identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com 2009-04-11 03:51 am (UTC)(link)
Oh this was just gorgeous... you had me worried there for a second....I almost started skimming :) But AHHH a happy ending :)

[identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com 2009-04-11 09:03 am (UTC)(link)
loved that, drama Queen indeed

brilliant!

[identity profile] wykling.livejournal.com 2009-04-11 09:33 am (UTC)(link)
Aaaww so cute!^^

The line about Ianto's buttocks made me giggle.
You've got to love Jack in Drama-Queen mode x3

Oh this fic made me smile, just what I needed^^
Thank you so much!*hugs*
Have a Happy Easter and take care :)
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[identity profile] candybree.livejournal.com 2009-04-11 05:23 pm (UTC)(link)
So sweet and funny!
You can't blame Jack for being a drama queen though. He thought his Ianto was dead!
Great job!!!

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-04-12 08:37 am (UTC)(link)
Awww, that was lovely.
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[identity profile] frakkin-addict.livejournal.com 2009-04-13 04:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry it took so long to read this... you know I was away. You had me so scared for a minute! I was terrified Ianto would die... loved him calling Jack a drama queen, so cute. Great little story, made me smile! Thanks! :) *hugs*

[identity profile] put-that-away.livejournal.com 2009-05-15 03:32 am (UTC)(link)
Awwww, this was so adorable, I just love all the things Jack says to Ianto! I love it :)

"Ah Christ, it's getting light out there hug*
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