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Ianto
Title: Ianto
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Not really, somewhere early in season 2
Disclaimer: No, I don't know them
Warning:mention of sex, m/m kissing
Summary: Jack's thoughts about Ianto…
Notes: For all of you who always read my fic and comment, for all of you who need fluffy and angsty fic, that's it's for you! Have great week-end my friends.
Beta: The fabulous and so talented just_being_me08
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Ianto
He gives me shivers. He’s my loyal soldier, my confidant, my broken lover. He gave me the focus I needed, the anchor that I desperately searched for in my dark drift. At first, it was a game, a dangerous game that a child would play, but without all the innocence. He betrayed us; he had been disloyal to me so that he could watch over her. I hated him for that, I could have killed him. The pain was so unreal, so cruelly intense. God, it’s ironic, now I could be on my knees to beg for his love, but never showing it myself. He always smells so good, of fresh coffee and spicy sweat is all I taste when my tongue devours his skin, when my teeth bite at his neck. He’s so sexy, his buttocks are perfect, I adore to grasp them firmly and feel him tense beneath of my touch. He’s so beautiful, his eyes are unique, when he smiles for just one moment I feel like a child. When desire explodes within me and I push him up against the wall, my body pressed against his, I want more than sex, I desperately crave the need to feel alive. He knows me, he saw my dark and miserable side and forgave me. When the pressure of my duties oppresses me, when life is a bitch, he holds me and makes me forget that I’m Captain Jack Harkness and for an instant I’m just a man. When he lies beside me sleeping, his fabulous naked beauty blinds me and I murmur his name like a prayer. I want love and Ianto Jones gives it to me. One day I’m gonna lose him, but for now it’s like an eternity in his arms.
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I know it's a little bit short, but it's for me to write long fic, because English it's not my first language.... But I hope you enjoyed and please, if you read take the time to write comments, its always a great pleasure to read you ;)
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Thank you so much for sharing! ^_^
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So beautiful! :')
utterly perfect: sweet,hot and a little bit angsty!
Thanks so much for sharing this with us^^
Keep up the great work :D
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:)
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Vous anglaise est bon, je suis impressionné =D
Pas sûr je peux dire la même pour ma française...
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Sometimes it is hard to relay so much emotion in so few words. Your story captured the storm in Jack heart very beautifully.
Merci
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*Lazy night in hug*
Fliss
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I am so proud of where your writing (and your particularly your english) is going. It really makes me happy to see how many wonderful comments you get for your writing. And you deserve every one of them my dear, you really do. :)
Keep writing, as I will definitely keep on being your beta. I love it when I find work like this *points at your fic* in my inbox. In fact....it makes me smile. So keep writing, and I shall keep on smiling like the crazy girl I am. :P
Anyway, you know that I love this piece so so much, and I think I actually commented on everything in my e-mail. But I just had to comment on this. :D
Prends soin de toi ma chere, and keep writing! :D
love
Siany
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This is my favourite line:
'...he holds me and makes me forget that I’m Captain Jack Harkness and for an instant I’m just a man...'
It was perfect and I loved it, beautiful darlin.
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Many good lines full of feelings but this one melted my heart: "I want more than sex, I desperately crave the need to feel alive."
Really nice job!! (from another High School History teacher)
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