Miss Brown
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Title: Miss brown
Genre: original fic
words: 709
Resume: Miss Brown cook dinner for her friends.
Beta: the so awesome and sexy woman
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Disclaimer: this original fic is own mine. Reference to people alive is pure accident.
Notes from the author: this fic is for the sublime
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Miss Brown
Miss Brown enters the store with a sweet smile on her face and the company of the door’s crystal bells in rhythm with her steps. In the icy display, a beautiful variety of fish and sea food stand proudly before her. The voice of the fish merchant echoes through the shop: “Miss Brown! What can I do for you today?”
The fish merchant is a large man, with big hands and deep, dark eyes. When he speaks he has this delicious Mediterranean accent that brings you to the place where the sky is bluer and where spices flavor the air. For a moment Miss Brown forget the grey sky and the rain outside.
“Good afternoon Mister Fotopoulos, I need your best and freshest fish.”
“Ho! But my fish are always fresh, Miss Brown!”
Miss Brown smiles; she likes to play with him.
“I know Mister Fotopoulos, it’s just that tonight I’m cooking for few friends and I want it to go perfectly.”
On the offended fish merchant’s face, sparkles in the eyes and a smile suddenly appears. With his bonhomie back, the fish man claps his hands and declares with a joyous voice, “Dinner with friends? That’s the life! For you I have these delicious and most tender fish. I reserve these just for my better clients, especially the beautiful ones.”
Miss Brown feels happiness tickling her skin. Minutes later, she exits the store with fresh fish and seafood packed in her bags. She’ll keep with her the promise of spices and the blue sky from places she’s never seen.
When Miss Brown enters the fruit grocery she can’t restrain a delicate laugh that dances off her lips and exits like the wind from her mouth. At the sight of the apples and citrus her mind flies away to return to a certain Sunday afternoon, not so long ago, when she and her best friend had tried to cook pies. The result was not what she’d been expected, but the delirious moment they had was better. Miss Brown likes to smell fruit. She picks up a basket of raspberries, apples and grapes. Then she picks mangos because she likes the colour of the flesh. At the line for the cashier, she takes an orange and smell it until it’s her turn to pay. When she leaves, Miss Brown has the world in her bags.
The door of Miss Brown’s flat is blue. Miss Brown doesn’t like her door, but she thinks it’s not the door that is important, but the person who welcomes the visitors. Since four o’clock in the afternoon she’s been cleaning her home, cooking and singing loudly. Miss Brown is happy; in a few moments good friends will arrive. The wine and beer will flow, the laughs and the conversation will explode, and the food and music will be delicious. Inside Miss Brown’s heart, a flame of love burns with intense desire: Miss Brown knows that Marc will be there tonight. Marc, the beautiful Marc, the sexy Marc. When the thought of Marc appears in her mind, Miss Brown blushes. The last time she saw him, he had kissed her goodbye on her cheeks, almost on her lips. It was like the world had spun in a brutal storm around her and the stars that night had sparkled just for her.
At six o’clock precisely, the doorbell rings. Excitedly, Miss Brown looks at herself in the mirror beside the blue door for one last time. She thinks she is gorgeous. When the blue door opens, her friends are there with their joy and love. One by one Miss Brown welcomes them in her arms. Then, Marc is there in front of her with flowers and wine. Miss Brown feels fire consuming her body. Marc’s smile lights his beautiful face. He kisses her on the cheeks, almost at her lips.
Miss Brown has a dinner tonight with her friends. The conversations are frenetic, laughs and happy yells fly in the air, foods and wine caress their mouths and good music makes their bodies move. Marc’s intense green eyes look at her and she feels suddenly so alive. Miss Brown is beautiful, and in her glorious happiness, she knows what love is.
FIN
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Date: 2010-08-29 07:58 pm (UTC)Beautiful story. :)
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Date: 2010-08-29 09:54 pm (UTC)Thank you very ma belle amie !!!
xxxx:D
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Date: 2010-08-30 06:40 pm (UTC)Just such a joyous story, and wonderful to spend time with friends like that. Thank you so much for this lovely piece of art!!!!
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Date: 2010-08-30 08:44 pm (UTC)*HUGS*
Thanks!!!!
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Date: 2010-08-30 09:10 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-08-30 09:37 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-09-03 12:02 pm (UTC)Especially that bit where Mark stands in front of her door and she opens it with her dirty apron. I love this bit of the movie! xD
So, I don't get this twitter/fb thing. What does that new crosspost option do exactly? And will you move totes to DW now? *nooooes* D:
edited for proper icon
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Date: 2010-09-03 01:08 pm (UTC)*HUGS*
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Date: 2010-09-03 01:23 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-09-03 01:29 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-09-03 01:34 pm (UTC)Bummer -___-" I don't really see the point in this feature anyway. Why would anyone like to crosspost a comment sb made on LJ to fb and twitter, especially if it's out of context? Sounds kind of dumb to me. xP
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Date: 2010-09-03 01:40 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-09-03 01:51 pm (UTC)Still, I can see why the new features are unsettling people x3
Well, I guess I'll wait and see what becomes of the whole thing, maybe I'll settle some stuff over to DW as well if things become too unsettling :/
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Date: 2010-09-03 01:53 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-09-03 01:57 pm (UTC)Yeah, I totally get that. I'd rather not have my little brother know either for the time being. *points at icon* I wouldn't be the only one feeling like Jack in that situation, lol.
Thankfully, my non-f-locked non-fic posts are general enough to leave me more or less unrecognisable. Plus I've never quite gotten into the whole facebooking thing. xD
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Date: 2010-09-03 02:03 pm (UTC)And yeah, the whole FB I spend enough time on here! I don't have time for FB LOL
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Date: 2010-09-03 02:17 pm (UTC)*giggles* Exactly! I barely manage LJ. Or twitter. Or DW. How am I supposed to keep up with fb also??? I'd need a tardis or two to get the whole thing managed xD
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Date: 2010-09-03 02:21 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-09-01 05:42 pm (UTC)Lovely story and I am SO honoured by the dedication! Gros câlins ma belle!
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Date: 2010-09-01 11:26 pm (UTC)Thanks!!!! I am very happy you liked it!!!
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Date: 2010-09-03 01:47 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-09-03 12:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-09-04 02:49 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-09-05 09:00 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-09-05 06:39 pm (UTC)I wait for the rest of your series!!!
xxxx
Thanks again!!! Your comment make my day!!!