May. 5th, 2010 08:53 pm
morgia: (Default)
[personal profile] morgia

Title: Music
Pairing: Ianto/Lisa
Rating: nc-15
Word count:  157 words
Spoilers: Cyberwoman
Disclaimer: I don't own Torchwood or any of the characters

Warning: angst
Summary:  Ianto Jones find comfort in music...
Beta:  The deilcious and sexy     [ profile] frakkin_addict 
Notes: The Torchwood muses are almost dead for me, but this little fic wanted to be alive. I like to think Ianto truly loved Lisa before Jack and really suffered alone hidden with his cybergirlfriend... This is the result of my love for jazz, a bad day with students and my passion to make suffer our pretty Ianto. *free hugs* (Because we always need hug)  Dont forget English is not my first language :)





The music, it is like little drops of heaven suspended in the air. Ianto Jones closes his eyes and smiles: his mind flies away. Inside him the ball of stress disappears, his shoulders fall softly, and the world around is lit by thousands of sparkles: Ianto Jones feels alive. The music caresses him like a lover, the trumpet seduces him, drum embraces him tightly: for a moment Ianto Jones doesn’t hear the sounds of the machines in the room. The young man knows it’s ephemeral, as though time stops just for him and her, stuck in a fragile glass bubble. He breathes deeply; he is so exhausted.  His life is just lies, faint smiles and cold seduction. But for a moment he forgets everything; it’s just her, the music and him. In the dark and isolated room, beside his cybergirlfriend, the young man just enjoys the fragile moment of happiness.

“I love you Lisa…”

The end


Date: 2010-05-06 01:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
That was beautiful. I know I couldn't survive long without music. It really does help to soothe away some of the stresses of the day and I can get really lost in it. It's nice to know that Ianto might have enjoyed a few moments of grace while living with the horror of caring for his half-converted cypergirlfriend. Nice job! :)

Date: 2010-05-06 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you very much. The music is like the words; I cant imagine my life without. I understand you.

I want to think that Ianto really loved his Lisa and has had some fragile moment like this with her before the end. So this is the result.

*hug* Merci :)

Date: 2010-05-06 02:25 am (UTC)
ext_47311: (Default)
From: [identity profile]
I love how you weave your passion for music into this story. It really creates such beautiful imagery in the face of Ianto's pain and heartache. I can totally see him playing music for Lisa and taking a few moments to let it soothe him as well.

Loved this! *hugs*

Date: 2010-05-06 02:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you ma chérie to always comfort me in my written. Its true that I put my love for music in this fic *hug*

I don't know if its because I am exhausted, but I have so big doubt in my writtens and more when I write in English. So thanks to comfort me and to tell me why you like what I write.

Take care mon amie


Date: 2010-05-06 03:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Yaaaay! You wrote Torchwood fic *cheers* :D

You know how much I adore music ma belle and I think that nothing shows your love of music better than this beautiful little piece. :3


PS: so sorry that I haven't replied to your latest posts but I can't watch youtube from here :/
Did you get my pm?

Date: 2010-05-06 10:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thanks!!!!*jumps with you around*

Yes, you are a real fan of music and this is why I am so happy you enjoyed my little fic. In fact, I had a very shit day (the school where I work is a total piece of shit) and I was soooooooooo in a bad shape when I arrived yesterday at home. Then, I put music (Melody Gardot in fact) and then it was like shushine shined just for me. So I thought at Ianto and Lisa, and this is the result.


Yes, I got it!!!! I am sooooo exhausted that its hard for me to write in English. I wait to reply correctly:)


Date: 2010-05-06 03:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Oh N, I think this was lovely in all it's dark sadness. I agree with you, I think he really did love her and night was probably really hard for him. I can very easily seeing him losing himself in music if only for a brief respite. Well done.

Date: 2010-05-06 10:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Ma chère amie,
Thanks so much for this comment, you put a big smile on my face.
I think Ianto and Lisa was had real love and what happened was a nightmare for them. Ianto was painfully broken. Poor baby, alone with her, broken and stressed and loved her so much... So I wanted to write a little something for them...


Date: 2010-05-06 01:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I think that he really loved Lisa before too, otherwise he wouldn't have gone through everything trying to hide her and fix her. It's good to think he could have had a few moments like this to forget how doomed things were and just be with her.

*hugs* Sorry the school is being so terrible for you

Date: 2010-05-06 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
I wanted to give to Ianto a little piece of happiness during his hard moment...


Date: 2010-05-06 04:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Sweet, sweet music. I have had music in my life ever since I can remember and for me it is like air. You have so beautifully captured what it is like for me and music. I feel it in every fibre of my body, it is the only thing that soothes me, calms my soul or fires me up!

Thank you for this perfect fic and I hope your day/week/month/year/decade/millenium is filled with good music, wonderful friends and family and smooth sailing in your classrooms
Take care x

Date: 2010-05-06 09:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
What a beautiful commnent to read from the person who is music. Music is part of my life, like the words. I think words could be music...

Thanks so much, I am really proud that you have enjoyed my little fic. *HUG*

Hope you have some happiness today :)

Date: 2010-05-06 11:04 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-05-06 11:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
*hug* Thanks Miss :)

Date: 2010-05-08 06:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
lovely and yeah, he loved her

Date: 2010-05-08 02:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thanks :)

Date: 2010-05-08 09:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Thank you very much !!!


morgia: (Default)

September 2010

   123 4
5 67891011

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Sep. 22nd, 2017 07:00 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios